第一段
(What an enlightening and illuminating1 picture2)3 it is! Featured4 in it is 描述图画中的人或物，who/which 描述图画，-ing引出另一个动作. It is so symbolic and philosophic that anyone5 in front of it might be very much attracted6. It goes far beyond any reasonable dispute 11
that7 （simple as this drawing may seem8） ,its intended meaning9 goes far-reaching10. 词句替换：
1可替换为：interesting and enlightening; fascinating and thought-provoking; striking and illuminating; symbolic and philosophic; impressive and instrutive
2 可替换为：cartoon; image; drawing; illustration
3 可替换为：What fascinating and thought-provoking picture they are! 4 可替换为：presented;portrayed;described;depicted;illustrated 5 可替换为：whoever
6 可替换为：illuminated;enlightened;struck
7 可替换为：这个句子可有可无，意识是：毋容置疑 8 可替换为：may appear; may look; may seem to be; looks 9 可替换为：implication 10 可替换为：far deeper
11 可替换为:这是一个非常经典的倒装句 第二段
1， 第一种格式：
That the drawing above does carry rather1 implication goes far beyond any reasonable dispute.Indeed,it is a vivid reflection2 of a fairly pervasive3 scene4 in nowadays society------指出图画要表达的含义. Nowhere in history has the phenomenon5 been concerned so much as in our society today.Similar happenings6 are now available7 in nearly all walks of life, and one of my acquaintances may serve as a case in point.She 举例子（要切题）.As is revealed in a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Sciences last September,76.1% percent of the people 切题 . 词句替换：
1可替换为：fairly; pretty;quite; very; important; significant 2可替换为：indicative(显示，表明) 3可替换为：prevalent；widespread; familiar 4可替换为：phenomenon
5可替换为：such a phenomenon; this issue; the issue
6可替换为：similar case; similar practices; similar events;such phenomenon
7可替换为：can be readily found
（第二段，原因段）Obviously /Evidently, the drawing mirrors a
current
phenomenon
about
______________________________（图画表达的普遍意义、社会普遍现象）which is both inspiring and thought-provoking . There’re numbers reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typically ones. For one thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to put more attention on self-interest
and
talk
less
about
the
spirit
of_______________________________（如中国传统美德，社会普遍价值观）.For another ,there are increasing numbers people
who
are
not
realizing____________________________________（….主旨精神的重要性）is indispensable. Undoubtedly, the nightmare will knock our door, if we turn blind to the problem.(好事时用这个比喻，坏事用前一个句子_________ to_____________填写如我们，…….什么什么精神，根据主旨意思来 just like fish need water to live, just like bird need wing to live这个括号里的句子用来替换the nightmare will knock our door, if we turn blind to the problem)
第三段 2,第二种格式
Given1 all arguments2 offered3 above,we may reasonably reach4
the conclusion that 切题句or四句话里选一句话. It is the responsibility of government, mass media and school of all levels to take full advantage of its publicity to awaken people to the significance(重要性)/severity(严重性) of this issue. Meanwhile,each of us should serve as driving force5, taking plunge into the campaign to promoto6 切题句. The general public,fortunately, have been made aware that 切题句or四句话里面选一句. There are good reasons to hope that such phenomenon will soon be popularized/end,and our society will be more happy、healthy and harmonious. 词句替换：
1可替换为：Taking into account 2可替换为：evidence 3可替换为：presented 4可替换为：draw;arrive 5可替换为：counterbalance 6可替换为：curb
7重要的那四句话：（背下来，在考场时临时发挥） （1）What is needed is a package deal.
（2）There has to be joint efforts of the while society.(必须有全社会的共同努力)
（3）However much importance we attach to this issue, it is, of course, far from enough.(无论我们多么重视这问题，都是远远不
够的)
（4）The sooner we take this phenomenon seriously, the better our future will be.
（切题句是要大家根据作文内容要求自己写，要是大家实在写不出来，就把你背下来的这四句话写上去！）
（第 三 段，措施段、总结段） as far as I’m concern/ personally , if lack ____________，the ___________（如主旨的道德危机、引发的…危机）crisis will lead to the corruption of public moral and irredeemable financial losses ,and even the building harmonious society will become an empty talk, There are some immediately measures that should be taken before it not too late , On one hand , “eight honors and eight disgraces ” advanced by Hu Jintao should be publicized so as to enhance our scenario of tradition virtues . On the other hand ,it’s the responsibility of the government ,mass media to enhance people’s awareness of____________________(要把主旨意上升到一个普遍价值的高度)as soon as possible ,and at the same time ,strengthen the regulation and Laws and regulations .Only when those above-mentioned measures are carried out can we live a world dimensional , colorful ,and vigorous.
( 第四段，备用段，即举例段、意义段、总结段，用于不适
合写措施的题目，可代替第三段或第二段)looking around, we can find similar happenings too numbers to list, the most persuasive
example
is
________________________________________________________________（举个和主旨类似的例子，但一定要有深度，比图画有普遍性）.If he would never have ___________________________we should learn from him so as to keep bright the key that open the treasury of great achievement . Today, the sprit of（尽量把主旨提高境界）______________________is also conducive to the building-up a harmonious society. In addition , to a county, the international image can be elevated by the enhancement of （主旨）__________________________________.If _____________________but
also_________________________our diligence and ingenuity will make our life more meaning and worthwhile (这是两个排比句).If we not only _______________________but also _________________________our（主旨体现的精神） ______________will be passed down from generation to generation.
（第二段）Obviously, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon about （以2010作文为例，填写个别人环保意
we
not
only
识淡薄）______________________________（即图画表达的普遍意义、社会普遍现象）which is both inspiring and thought-provoking . There’re numbers reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typically ones. For one thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to put more attention on self-interest and talk less about the spirit of_____（如环保对人类生存的至关重要性）__________________________（即主旨反映的中国传统美德，社会普遍价值观）.For another ,there are increasing numbers people who are not realizing ______（环保对___人类子孙后代的重要性）___________________________（即….主旨精神的重要性）is indispensable. Undoubtedly, the nightmare will knock our door, if we turn blind to the problem.(___如填写环保______ to___人类生存__________，…….什么什么精神，根据主旨意思来…..to….. just like fish need water to live, just like bird need wing to live这个括号里的这个黑体字句子用来替换the nightmare will knock our door, if we turn blind to the problem，用来表达当主题是好事时的一个比喻)
翻译：明显的是，图画生动形象的描写了一个让我们受到启发和深思的目前社会现象--------------------这种现象的形成有很多原因，在这里我只说下最典型的原因。一方面，随着
改革开放带来的30年的经济奇迹，人们把精力放在了自我的兴趣上，很少再谈论---------------。从另一方面说，有越来越多人对------------不了解也是不可忽视的重要原因。毫无疑问，如何我们再对----------睁一只眼闭一只眼的话，噩梦将会降临。（用于好事时替换上一句话，--------对于----------就像鸟儿离不开翅膀一样，就像鱼儿离不开水一样）
（第 三 段） as far as I’m concern, if lack ___普遍的环保意识_________，the 环境破坏___________（如主旨的道德危机、引发的…危机）crisis will lead to the corruption of public moral and irredeemable financial losses ,and even the building harmonious society will become an empty talk, There are some immediately measures that should be taken before it not too late , On one hand , “eight honors and eight disgraces ” advanced by Hu jintao should be publicized so as to enhance our scenario of tradition virtues . On the other hand ,it’s the responsibility of the government ,mass media to enhance people’s awareness of______保护环境功在当地利在千秋______________(要把主旨意上升到一个普遍价值的高度)as soon as possible ,and at the same time ,strengthen the regulation and Laws and regulations about________环境 .Only when those above-mentioned measures are carried out can we live a world dimensional , colorful ,and vigorous.
翻译：我认为，如果缺少--------，-----------危机将导致公共道德的危机和不可估量的经济损失，甚至建设社会主义和谐社会将成为一句空话。在造成严重后果之前，需要马上采取及时有效的措施。一方面，胡提出的八荣八耻作为社会基本准则必须在人民大众中普及，来提高人们的传统道德。另一方面，尽可能快的提高人们的-------意识，是、媒体、学校的责任。于此同时，要加强关于-----------的法律法规建设。只要以上提到的措施实施了，我们的世界才是活力的、有意义的、多彩的。
